Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Tuesday, March 5, 2019
Korimako Koriwai
8 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post

Kia ora Adam
ReplyDeleteIt was great to see this Korowai during assembly! Did this make you all feel part of the Korimako Hub?
Hi Mrs Pascoe
DeleteYes the Korowai does make me feel a part of Korimako as we are all stronger together.
Hello,Adam
ReplyDeleteI liked the way you have put punctuation and detail in this. I think the Koriwai is really cool in our hub. once again it is really cool and you've done a great job.
Hi Liam
DeleteThank you for the comment
Kia ora Adam,
ReplyDeleteI like the way you took a pic of the Korowai (I mean some people not from this school anyway try to discibe it) Next time you could try not to move the camera when you take the picture(It was a bit blurry).
Although I do like the whole thing.
Kia ora Olivia
DeleteIt was really hard to get close with my device to get a good picture
Thank you for the comment
Hi Adam
ReplyDeleteI like how the photo has been taken.
Maybe next time you could go closer to the korowai to get a better photo.
I liked how you added a bit of information about the korowai.
Kia ora Blake
DeleteIt was really hard to get close with my device to get a good picture
Thank you for the comment