Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, June 28, 2019
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia ora Adam
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed reading your post about Chimpanzees. It was well set out and informative. One thing you might do next time is not put so many words on the Introduction page as it was quite hard to read. Think about how you could make this a bit less and in a bigger font (like the other pages).
Well done Ads! I'm really proud of of you! love Mum!
ReplyDeleteHI Adam it is me Sree I really found the pictures funny.This reminded me from when I read an article about Chimpanzees and monkeys.Next Time you could change the colours.But that was great\
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