This is my first blog post in the amazing Toroa hope you like it
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, February 14, 2020
Perfect Portrait
This is my first blog post in the amazing Toroa hope you like it
3 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post
Kia Ora Adam,
ReplyDeleteI love the way you have put lot's of information in this description it tells me a lot about you. Did you think about adding more dark colours in your portrait. Maybe you could add more detail around your top. But overall your portrait is very good.
Hi Adam I really like your art it is very good.The the interesting part is I play the keyboard too. maybe next time you could put in some more colour.
ReplyDeleteHi Adam! I love your portrait! I also love your description of why you included certain symbols etc. Well done buddy! Keep up the amazing work. Love Mum
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