We are involved in the Get NZ writing and we are writing poems based on William Carlos William's poem. This is just to say
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Monday, March 2, 2020
This is just to say...
We are involved in the Get NZ writing and we are writing poems based on William Carlos William's poem. This is just to say
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Hi Adam I really like your poem it is very funny.This reminded me of when I did that, i was eating broccoli🌳and yes I have done a lot of naughty things.
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DeleteThank you for the comment and positive feedback.
Next time could you please say more in your Comment please
Thanks Adam
Kia ora Adam, this is really runny, yes I have done multiple naughty things but I am not going to state any of them. next time you could give us a little bit more information on Get NZ writing as I would love to know more. Thank you.
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